Your
Resume
A Check List for
Todays Trends
By: Perry E. Ellie, MA, RHIA, FAHIMA
President, H.I.M. Recruiters
Does your resume work for you? The bottom line is that you must look good on
paper, if you want to interview for the job. As the owner of a health care recruiting firm
specializing in Health Information Management, I critique hundreds of resumes per year. By
employing the common sense concepts in this article you can enhance your
resume, find the work of your dreams and change your life.
Let me begin by stating there is no one correct resume format. We have included one
sample resume for reference purposes, but you can take the ideas and concepts presented
here and adapt them to meet your own personal needs. You may even choose to compose more
than one resume to optimally present your qualifications for employment for different
types of positions. Resumes are created to reflect your job history and your own personal
style. Thats right, your style, your thoughts and your accomplishments should come
alive through the words, format and finishing touches your resume conveys. Your resume
must be easy to scan and interesting to read. The challenge to you is to create a resume
that contains enough enticing tidbits to achieve the goal of obtaining you an interview.
In our culture people read from the top down and from left to right. So because the
purpose of your resume is to be read, always keep this fact in mind as you write. For
example, do not utilize valuable left margin space for dates, move dates to the right
margin and use the left for information which will enhance your candidacy. Follow this
theme throughout. Start by presenting the area which demonstrates your strongest
qualifications. If your strength is your experience, or education or credentials or even
volunteer experience; whatever, lead with it and proceed with the top to bottom concept.
If your job title is more impressive than the company, list it first. Similarly, if your
college is more impressive than the degree, then list it first.
How long should your Resume be? The "acceptable" length of a
resume often creates a fair amount of discussion. Must my resume be only one page? Are
three or even four pages too much? Again, a common sense approach should prevail. In most
cases, a one-page resume is preferred, unless your qualifications are extensive. The more
focused your document is, the more likely it will be read. Strive to never exceed 1-1/2 to
1-3/4 pages. Remember your resume should not read like a job description. You do not need
to recreate your entire past history. A resume should stress your qualifications, skills,
and achievements instead of your duties and responsibilities.
There are numerous ways to accomplish the goal of resume brevity and still optimally
reflect the depth of your qualifications for an opportunity.
Allow us to walk you through a resume line by line, section by section. Remember, every
word, every line contributes to the length and to your résumés purpose.
To further make this point, beginning at the very top, the word "Resume" is
not needed and a waste of space. The style and format of the document indicates its
function, so a title is not needed. By this simple change, one line in length is saved for
a more valuable message.
Getting started: At this point you are still staring at a blank page.
Many people have difficulty moving beyond this point into the true content of their
resumes. They procrastinate using excuses such as "I really dont know where to
begin," "I dont have enough experience, or education, or credentials, or
...," they just have a block in getting started.
We would encourage you to begin with notes and develop them into a rough draft. Think
back over your experience and jot down highlights of your life, education and work
experience. At this point dont worry about the exact words or dates, concentrate on
your accomplishments. As your record each positive point it should provide you with
confidence to proceed.
Getting to it: If space allows, you may choose to center your name and
contact information. For optimal use of space place your full name in the top left corner
of your page and include any credentials or degrees you may possess. For some reason,
which I do not understand, the majority of resumes make you search throughout to determine
education and credentials i.e. Perry E. Ellie, MA, RHIA, FAHIMA. Why conceal this information? If
you have these types of credentials, use them. If you dont, or if they are less than
ideal for the position you are applying, leave this information for your education section
later in the resume. For the vast majority of candidates it is preferable to list your
education and credentials up front. Utilize word processing text editing capabilities to
highlight or draw attention to this and other key information in a way to match your own
personal style.
Under you name include your full mailing address, including zip code. If you are into
the internet, I encourage you to share your E-mail address under the city, state, zip code
line. Across from your name and address on the right side margin include both your
home and office phone numbers. Many people omit their office numbers for confidentiality
purposes and therefore miss many employment opportunities. Almost all employers are
sensitive to your privacy and will be very discreet if they attempt to contact you at
work. Generally, hiring authorities work the same daytime hours as you and they will
become extremely frustrated if they cannot reach you during the day. If you are unable to
talk on the phone at work, explain this and make quick arrangements to speak later. If
sharing a work number is impossible, I strongly recommend that you have a functional
telephone answering machine on your home line to receive messages.
Do you need an Objective? In my opinion NO! Objective statements are
usually written in such general terms that they are useless. Who doesnt want a
position which is "challenging," or has "growth potential." Drop the
objective and use this space to further describe your qualifications.
Sometimes, but rarely, an objective can be beneficial when applying for a certain
position. By creating a targeted objective you can zero-in on one opportunity. But even
then I would caution that this can be a self-limiting exercise. Because if the position
has already been filled your specific objective may eliminate you from consideration for
other opportunities which may exist and you are not aware of. Our advice is to stay away
from an "objective statement."
Whats next? Our recommendation is that the next section of your
resume should provide an overview of your career to date. Following a left to right margin
line of separation you should have a section titled Summary, Achievements or
Accomplishments or a similar word to reflect your style. Bold this and all section
title words to draw attention in a cursory review by your reader. This "Summary"
section should contain your best selling features. We suggest five to eight bulleted items
which begin with action verbs. A selected list of action verbs is attached for your use.
We further advise that each bullet begin with a different action verb to show your
creativity verses the repetitive use of the same word.
In our sample resume the next section is Experience, so we will address that
area next. For you, the next section should be the area which demonstrates your strongest
qualification. For students it is often Education, for highly involved volunteers it may
be Professional Activities. Our best advice is to write and polish each section. Then,
utilizing word processing, you can cut and paste the sections in an optimal sequence for
the opportunity you are applying.
How do you show your work experience? When sharing your Experience,
always begin with your most recent position. Share the name of your employer, city, state
and ideally some brief information about the company. As in our sample, "500 bed,
non-profit, teaching hospital, managed 40 FTE." This allows the reader to zero-in and
qualify your experience. But we often receive resumes that require us to research the
employer to determine if they are a 50 bed or a thousand bed operation; a Fortune 500 firm
or an entrepreneurial start-up. Some candidates believe that sharing that they work in a
100 bed facility may eliminate them from consideration for larger facilities. Certainly
this possibility exists. We maintain that sharing an incomplete background requires extra
effort by the employer to determine your full employment history and that this "extra
effort" may result in the employer moving on to the next resume where all needed
information is provided. We often encounter resumes where the writer seems to assume that
everyone knows that "Major Medical Center" is a large, teaching hospital in
Largo, Florida. Please remember that as you E-mail, fax or mail your resume around the
country or the world, that your reader is likely to be totally unfamiliar with the
particulars of your employers. Share this information in a cursory manner so you may be
matched to future opportunities that optimally complement your experience to date.
Next in the Experience section, for each employer, include your job title. If you were
promoted by this employer, list your final position and list this accomplishment as one of
your bullets. Dates should be included on the right-hand margin in a summary fashion. Our
sample includes dates in a year-to-year format to simplify presentation. You may choose a
month and year format, but please do not include specific dates. Obviously, dates of
employment are needed, but how specific you are is up to you. Specificity of dates
highlights gaps in employment and appropriately raises questions. Always be totally honest
when sharing dates and all resume information. However, the year-to-year format will
likely provide you with a more personal opportunity to explain any potential breaks in
employment. Make sure that your dates make sense! We often see overlapping dates that
create confusion and question. If you have held multiple positions at the same time,
explain this in a clear concise way on your resume or in a cover letter.
When listing your work experience it is generally not necessary to go back more than
about ten years. If you have been with the same employer for over ten years, then it is
logical to list your previous position. On our sample resume we included the line,
"Several Other Progressive Health Information Management Positions 1977-1982,"
to summarize this prior period. Remember, this is a suggestion to condense the length of
your resume. You may choose to share additional experience if you feel it is pertinent to
the opportunity you are seeking. Generally however, any experience from over ten years ago
is outdated and a misuse of valuable resume space.
Under each employer, position title and time frame you should include a brief paragraph
or a few bullets highlighting your experience. Again utilize action verbs and statements.
Include facts to authenticate results. For example, "Enhanced DRG reimbursement by
increasing case-mix from 1.21 to 1.53." List all your employment in a reverse
chronological format. Be factual and creative, your resume is a critical marketing tool!
What is important when sharing your Education and Credentials? We stress
that it is critical to share your Education and Credentials in an accurate and complete
fashion. When listing education, list your highest degree achieved first. Follow this with
lesser degrees and credentials. Share your degree (i.e., MA, BS, AS), the year it was
achieved (Only if in the last twenty years to avoid age discrimination), the University or
college and its location (city, state). For example, "M.A., Health Care
Administration, 1993, Central Michigan University, Mount Pleasant, MI." If you have
college courses but no degree; list this in a summary form. Be careful not to misrepresent
yourself with the written perception of a degree. It is common to see a college and year
listed, with no indication of whether this represents a degree or just coursework towards
a degree.
Why your credentials should be included! Often neglected on a large
percentage of the resumes we receive are credentials. Most resumes logically indicate
degrees in Health Information Technology or Management, but do not indicate credentials.
As shown in our sample resume, "Registered Health Information Administrator,
1988." Many H.I.M. professionals seem to think that listing a degree automatically
represents the RHIT or RHIA credential. This is simply not true. Each year only about 70%
of those eligible pass the accreditation and registration exams. The thirty percent who do
not still indicate their degrees on their resumes. The only distinction potential
employers can make on a resume is whether or not the credential is included. We encourage
you to write your resume for your reader. Include the year your credential was achieved as
proof to your success. This information will also facilitate credential verification in
the employment screening process. Our firm has noted an increasing trend of degree and
credential falsification. Verification of backgrounds is an ever increasing need in
todays society.
Are volunteer professional activities remarkable? Absolutely! Experience
as a professional volunteer demonstrates leadership, networking and a professional
commitment. You may choose to call the section Professional affiliations, activities or
choose to not include it at all. In our sample we included activities at a national, state
or local level. If this is appropriate for you, do the same. If you have professional
leadership experience in your work group, department or facility share this information
with your reader. Recall any awards or special recognitions you may have received
and include them here. This is also an appropriate area to include publications or
presentations. Please recall however that resume length is a key issue. If you have
extensive professional activities, you will need to summarize and maintain a separate list
of accomplishments to be shared upon request. Detailed lists of this nature are
appropriate in a Curriculum Vitae (C.V.) format. A C.V. is basically an extended resume
with full detail in the area of professional involvement, publications and speaking
engagements. Professional sections are certainly not limited to Health Information
Management activities and you should feel free to include other professional associations
where you are active. This may include anything from HIMSS (Healthcare Information and
Management Systems Society) to the American Cancer Society. In our sample resume we
attempted to show both leadership and membership roles. We also chose to include some
important dates and to exclude others. Utilize your judgment to determine your optimal
presentation in this area.
Should you include a Personal section? Rarely, information such as your
marital status, age, weight, height, hobbies and interests generally have minimal
relevance to your qualifications for a position. In fact, we could make a strong argument
that this information can work against you. Although it is illegal to discriminate for a
litany of reasons, it occurs constantly. Your prospective employer may not like thin and
tall people, they may prefer married employees, they may not enjoy the outdoors or stamp
collecting. We advise against sharing this information because it may trigger a conscious
or even an unconscious bias in the hiring authority.
In limited situations we have identified advantages to including selective personal
information. For example, if you are an older candidate, you might desire to show vitality
by citing sports and travel activities; a sales professional may indicate unmarried status
combined with a willingness to travel and/or relocate. It is also generally advisable for
students to utilize a personal section. This information often compensates for an
understandable lack of professional experience, and at the same time, communicates that
you are a well-rounded, active, interesting candidate. It may also serve to provide an
ice-breaker for an interview.
Why students face a special challenge. The common scenario of minimal of
work experience needs to be overcome to create an eye-catching, personalized and
informative resume. This drawback can be minimized by emphasizing the many strengths which
students have.
In addition to energy and enthusiasm, students should draw attention to academic
excellence, volunteer work, leadership roles, internships, computer expertise, previous
employment experience, ability to travel or relocate, foreign language skills and any
other attributes of this type that may apply.
Do you include references in your resume? No, reference information
should be kept on a separate sheet of paper from your resume. In fact, the statement
"References will be furnished upon request" is again wasted space that can be
utilized to share your actual qualifications for a position. Candidates seriously under
consideration will be required to furnish references, and it is assumed that they are
available.
When creating your sheet of references we recommend that they be professional
references and that preferably they will be previous supervisors. Include the persons
name, title, telephone number and your working relationship to them. We typically check
three references, but prefer five to be listed as options should some references be
unavailable. For your best presentation, it is wise to insure that each of your references
is positive. We often encounter candidate supplied references which are far from
enthusiastic about a candidate in review.
What are finishing touches? They are the distinctions that make your
resume stand out. Best added to your resume at the conclusion of the content design
process it involves utilizing different type styles, sizes (12 point recommended), bold
and italics highlighting capabilities, graphics such as different style bullets, lines and
margin adjusters to determine the optimal look for you. As indicated by these suggestions,
we recommend utilizing a word processor and a high quality printer to produce your
finished product. Typewriters are no longer on acceptable instrument for resumes, and you
may even desire to consider professional typesetting. It is our opinion, however, that the
standard 300-600 DPI printer is of acceptable quality when compared to the additional cost
of professional typesetting.
Increasingly resumes are shared as email attachments with cover letters providing the
introduction. This method of distributing your resume is strongly encouraged and provides
several advantages to both the reader and the sender. First it is virtually instantaneous
in delivery and easy for the sender to do! In addition, it finds the reader wherever they
may be reviewing their email and facilitates their sharing perfect copies to all pertinent
parties within the hiring organization. Emailed resumes are also less likely to be
misplaced and are easily retrievable. Mailed and faxed resumes tend to indicate that the
sender is behind the times and not technologically savvy.
In considering your résumés overall presentation, remember that "less is
more." Surround your best qualifications with empty or "white space" to
draw attention. In other words, it is more effective to present a few easy-to-read
highlights than to cram a lot of information onto a page.
Do you need a cover letter? A key complement to your resume in many
situations, cover letters are documents personalized to the reader/organization and should
be designed to leave a strong, positive impression. A concise cover letter should be about
four paragraphs long and address each of the following areas in a concise manner.
The first paragraph should open with an introductory statement that grabs the readers
attention and provides the impetus for them to continue reading. Strive to be upbeat, but
not offensive. The second paragraph should briefly summarize your background and you
credentials for the position. The third paragraph should indicate why you are interested
in the position, company, product or service. Stress what you can contribute to the
company. The final paragraph should emphasize your desire for an interview and your
intention to follow-up with a phone call. Then do it!
Do not trivialize the ability of a well-written cover letter. It can very easily
influence a potential employer or even a recruiter to read your resume and act on it!
Do we need to summarize? Hopefully not!, but briefly... We have strived
to present one general method for resume preparation that is both straight-forward and
logical. Our intent was to share common sense concepts which will allow you to prepare a
resume for maximum effectiveness. Most people already have a resume so there is no need to
re-invent the wheel. Take what you have, apply these ideas and feel proud of your result.
Acknowledgments
A heartfelt thank you to my wonderful wife Nancy
and my writing mentor Angela Picard for each of their thoughts, insights, contributions,
editing and support in the writing of this article.
Resume Writing Resources and
References
1. Spina, Vicky. Getting Hired in the
90s. Chicago : Dearborn Financial Publishing, Inc., 1995.
2. Fournier, Myra and Spin, Jeffrey. Encyclopedia of Job-Winning Resumes.
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